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Kombat FuryIt was a partially cloudy day when The doorbell rang. As Josh went to answer it he was greeted by the mailman telling him he had a apackage that needed to be signed for. After he had signed for the package he noticed a small card attached to it. he read it aloud."'Dear Josh have a surperb birthday and I hope you enjoy the game. Signed Y.B.H.' who is Y.B.H.?" he asked himself. He then went ahead and opened the package revealing a brand new never opened copy of Mortal Kombat 9. but at the top of the case he read the words Special Limited Edition. "A limited edition copy who could afford something this rare?" Josh was again confused but went ahead and popped the disc into his console. when he went to the character selection he saw every character was already unlocked. but this was not the biggest shock, before he could choose a screen popped up asking for his favorite kombatant. After seeing him in action he decided It'd be Cyber Sub-Zero. After hitting the button the screen flashed a bl
Diary of the 4th reincarnation of Yuki the Eldra 1Day 1:I'm getting used to this new form and decided to start writing a log no more of a diary to chronicle my experiences in this realm the locals call Equestria....I can only hope that the one persuing me looks over this dimension in his searching.....He must never again find me....I do not want to run anymore or watch those around me get hurt for my mere existence.....I swear this on my honor as the embodiment of ice and cold......I only hope if something were to happen to me that this holo-diary falls into the hands of one who will preserve it. As usual I will start refering to my age anew though I'll start with 13 years as to avoid suspision. no one or as they say in this dimension no pony must really know of my true age.....It's been 3 Millenia since the massacre.....since he turned on us and I strated running......3 millenia I have outrun my elder brother the embodiment of heat and flames.....It is getting late and I have still not found a place to stay as of late....and to anyp